The Ant Story

A tiny black ant in the sugar, I found strolling by

That daddy just brought from the shop nearby.

Mom took a tin and poured in the sugar,

I waited as the ant came out like a skilled digger.

Scared he seemed, as faster he strolled;

Up, to the lid then back down he patrolled.

“Poor thing, he’s trapped” I heard someone muse;

“Or a naughty little kid, as to explore was he chose,

Like that little lamb, from the story mom once told

Who went out all alone, by a wolf he got fooled.”

“An ant in a tin of sugar, what else would he need?

Lucky him!” I mused, “As lifetime he can feed.”

“Nah, you got it wrong, kid” I heard mumma say;

“Freedom is more worthy, how hungry you may stay.

If I lock you in a room full of chocolates of your choice,

Will you stay in there whole your life and rejoice?”

“Never! Mumma, how I’ll sleep not by your side?

Whom will I hug, when those bad dreams stride? 😭😭

Poor little ant must be missing mumma too!

Now I know mumma, taught the best way you!”

I took him from the tin and put into a box,

Ran to the shop and left him with his folks.

~Well, I know this one turned out to be crappy, πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ butΒ I wrote this considering myself as a kid of 3-5 years old. Tonight, I was on my usual patrol to kitchen for some snack (self) service (when you’re preparing for an exam, you feel more hungry than usual). Just then, dad came in with sugar. Mom told me to put it in a tin, but I was already busy watching the ant in the packet. Mom did it herself and closed the lid with ant in it. Well, she din see the ant at all. This much is real, and the rest I totally made up. Nah, I din go to shop with the ant to take him back to his family. I got that from a story about a Sufi called Shaikh Abu Bakr Shibli, when saw an ant in the sack of grains he bought, he went back to the shop, saying separating any living thing from its habitat is wrong. But yeah, I rescued him out of the tin.

Well, the featured image, i was so lazy to search for a good pic, so I drew one. πŸ˜€ ~

20 Comments Add yours

  1. Shoaib says:

    Dayum. This was good. funny and awesome. πŸ˜› I don’t really like poems but this one was gooooddddd. And the drawing! Hahaha. It’s cute πŸ˜› your drawing is good! πŸ™‚ keep writing! πŸ™‚

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    1. aishahnaaz says:

      Haha. Thank you!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ I’m happy that it brought a smile on your face after that moody post you just posted! πŸ˜‰

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      1. Shoaib says:

        You’re welcome πŸ™‚


  2. Hiba says:

    This was such a good poem! Even if you wrote from the perspective of a three year old.
    Freedom is better than any other treasure.

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    1. aishahnaaz says:

      Thank you so much!! Yeah. Freedom is indeed a treasure we always take for granted.

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      1. Hiba says:

        I agree.
        We never realize it’s worth until it’s gone.

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  3. khansana1000 says:

    aww it is so cute! πŸ™‚ loved it Aishah , the message was even more beautiful ! nothing more worthy than freedom and being with loved ones.

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    1. aishahnaaz says:

      True!! πŸ™‚ thank you!!! :*

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  4. Saiz says:

    This was a cute read, wholesomely. Smilingly beautiful. Yes…:-)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. aishahnaaz says:

      Haha. Thank you!! πŸ˜€

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      1. Saiz says:

        And I even felt like reading a nursery rhyme at a couple of instances. πŸ˜€

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      2. aishahnaaz says:

        I wrote it singing to myself like a nursery kid haha. πŸ˜€

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      3. Saiz says:

        Really? I read in the same way and that is why I felt it. πŸ˜›
        Write more poems. You’re good at it. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

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      4. aishahnaaz says:

        Subhanallah.. πŸ˜…πŸ˜…thanks for that!! I’m writing poems after a long break. Tbh, I’m not getting the flow. I’ll try though πŸ™‚

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      5. Saiz says:

        You just have to compose it. Your rhymes are so well maintained even. The flow will pick itself up In Sha Allah. πŸ™‚

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      6. aishahnaaz says:

        Insha Allah.. πŸ™‚ the rhymes come automatically. Actually I want to write one without rhyming. But dunno how every time it end up rhyming :/

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      7. Saiz says:

        Rhymes are love. To me.
        Trying new things is nicer though. Good luck with next ones.

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      8. aishahnaaz says:

        Shukran, jazakallah.. πŸ™‚

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